apki ye kavita mujhe bahut ache lagte hai bahut kam rachnaye hote hai jo kam shabdome hi man me kai bhav umadati hai . jangali man jitna apke lea sach hai utna hi sabhi ke lea .bahut acha likha hai .
jangali man ke mausam annek, ek tanhai ek uub ek kasmasahat ek jirah , ankho ke palki bandh ho to raat aur khuli ho to din, jangli man ke aarzo aanek , ek vidhroh ek kranti ek parivartan, honth juda hoto hath aur mile ho to samarthan , jangali man ka jina rrat din aur din raat!
बहुत खूब, लाजबाब !
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ReplyDeletejangli man wah re man........bahut khoob!!kitna aasan hai jangli man se jina...is'nt it ?
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ReplyDeleteapki ye kavita mujhe bahut ache lagte hai bahut kam rachnaye hote hai jo kam shabdome hi man me kai bhav umadati hai . jangali man jitna apke lea sach hai utna hi sabhi ke lea .bahut acha likha hai .
ReplyDeletejangali man ke mausam annek,
ReplyDeleteek tanhai ek uub ek kasmasahat ek jirah ,
ankho ke palki bandh ho to raat
aur khuli ho to din,
jangli man ke aarzo aanek ,
ek vidhroh ek kranti ek parivartan,
honth juda hoto hath aur mile ho to samarthan ,
jangali man ka jina rrat din aur din raat!